Thunderstorms are thunder strikes a lightning bolt thru the air it,s blue can be white after the light hits the loud sound of thunder as it makes a rumble sound. The brighter or the closer it gets the louder it gets. When you see big black clouds or it starts hailing that's when you know it could be coming. If you hold something metal up in the air it will shock the meal that you are holding and may kill you  if it gets shocked.

The sound of broken class

The sound of broken glass someone's thru a rock thru a window and smashed it or a air could have broken it by the cold air outside and the hot/worm inside going against the class

When i heard the crash of broken class

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3. Senses touch, smell, sight, hear, taste

The hillman imp is  a small classic car that was light with a four cylinder engine the engine is in the back it is a two door car  with three seats in the back and two in the front there is no center console just a emergency brake.49

The new Mazda mx 5 it is a roadster with class rear window unlike the 1995 miata it has a plastic rear window back to the new version it’s a sporty looking car six speed manual gearbox with seat warmers these type a cars are for summer to put the soft top down to let all the bbrez to come in the car and out the back.

The 1995 Mazda mx 5 is a cheap sports car. The engine was made for mods like turbo blow off valves. It can be lowered  it is a convertible little car red is a popular color for it. it’s two door car with plastic rear window you can put the soft top down and buy a hardtop to stop you for falling out when you accidentally roll then you have a metal roll bar that sits under the soft top. White dark green and red are really good colors. 99

The 2016 Honda Civic is a line of small cars manufactured by Honda it's a sporty looking car its a 2 door car it looks really fast it has tinted windows it's lipstick red it new features it's a sedan. Some of the features  a 1.5 liter, turbocharged four cylinder engine and heated seats with reversing camera. When it senses an otherwise unavoidable collision with a vehicle detected in front of you. Other hondas are all different some crap out in the middle of nowhere or when you go to start it.93

The Mazda Rx7 batman The rx7 was produced by the Japanese automaker  it is a sport car yes it is worth a lot of money they are all rotary. If you turbo charge them they are quite they have pop up headlights. The mx5 style if you keep pressing the headlights button the light go up and down one after the other.65

The Subaru or Toyota they copped each other they have the same car with different engines and different brands  the cars look cool but one coped the other anyway they are different brands like the badges they have two sorts of engines form the two.44

The skyline R34 is a super car that is made to street race against others cars they get pulled over a lot because of how they sound and how they look they can be drift cars but who wants to waste a nice R34 with big rear spoiler with black wheels. They are known for modified engines and big turbochargers.

gust of wind as it goes thru the forest making a whistle a big sounds knocking trees down the heaver the wind the more the cold comes straight at you things get flug like trampolines catch the wing and fly off the ground and flies somewhere rubbish gets flung everywhere along the ground you can fly a kite in the wind there might be a sikeline which means tornado or just heavy winds that can blow stuff far far away or roofs off houses and power lines and trees it can even blow over trucks van cars.

Windmeals make power from theg propellers known as a turbine that produces power some go in water some go other places like on a farm anywhere here's what inside a wind turbine. Wind turbines some spin to fast and break or fall to the ground and catching fire they are made of concrete and the propellers are carbon fiber and mesh.

A turbine having a large vaned wheel rotated by the wind to generate electricity to other houses and what ever uses electricity and  when they go too fast they will have a brake and if that doesnt work thats it the pads will need to be replaced

winter

I was born in winter and i liked the outdoors because of snow and you can play like throw snowballs or ski on ice. Snow is cold and moshe and plane white eating snow can give you brain freeze in the morning the grass was frosti last night i put a bucket full of water the next morning the bukit was frozen solid when i  got back home it was half melted we had fun with it.

I put the ice on the trampoline and did flips over it.

When it rain it hails at the same time and when i went to go play in it it hurts when the hail comes smashing down on your back.

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